My feedback last time was to go more into depth and be more enthusiastic. I think I am more enthusiastic in this elevator pitch than last time. I know more about the direction of my product and features that I want in it. I also know more about who I am pitching to.
Hi, Courtney, I really enjoyed your third elevator pitch. I think you definitely improved in the sense of enthusiasm. I think this might be because you are more knowledgeable about the topic you want to discuss. Over the last few weeks you seemed to learned a lot about the field your business idea inhabits. It sounds like you made it more exciting than before. You still nee to be more dynamic in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteHey Courtney, I really enjoyed your post. I think this is the best elevator pitch you have given so far. I think you did a better job with adding inflections in your voice and overall kept my attention longer. I really have enjoyed seeing your elevator pitch improve over the class and I know you will improve even more on the next iteration of the elevator pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Courtney. I think your post was extremely thorough and you seem to understand just exactly what you needed to improve on with your past two elevator pitches. This is 100% the best pitch that have you have delivered in this class. It is very cool to see how you have changed the way you deliver this pitch as the class has progressed! Great job!
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