My feedback last time was to go more into depth and be more enthusiastic. I think I am more enthusiastic in this elevator pitch than last time. I know more about the direction of my product and features that I want in it. I also know more about who I am pitching to.
Dear Courtney, Thank you, I enjoyed listening to your pitch. I think you could still up the enthusiasm even another level to make the pitch truly eye catching. The information you are saying is all good and makes sense to me, but I think a bit of “X” factor in your pitch could be added to make it truly entertaining.
Hi, Courtney, I really enjoyed your second elevator pitch. I think you definitely improved in the sense of enthusiasm. I think this might be due to the fact that you know more about what you're pitching about which helps a lot. I think that would make it a lot more exciting to talk about. However, I think you could be more dynamic.
Dear Courtney, Thank you, I enjoyed listening to your pitch. I think you could still up the enthusiasm even another level to make the pitch truly eye catching. The information you are saying is all good and makes sense to me, but I think a bit of “X” factor in your pitch could be added to make it truly entertaining.
ReplyDeleteHi, Courtney, I really enjoyed your second elevator pitch. I think you definitely improved in the sense of enthusiasm. I think this might be due to the fact that you know more about what you're pitching about which helps a lot. I think that would make it a lot more exciting to talk about. However, I think you could be more dynamic.
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